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hoosierbitch) wrote2010-05-07 05:27 pm
hoosierbitch) wrote2010-05-07 05:27 pm
MMOM #7: Phone Sex
I just wrote this, and don't even have time to edit it - I APOLOGIZE FOR THE MANY MISTAKES. BYE! GOTTA GO WORK MORE. :D
“Peter?”
“You sure answered the phone quickly. A little eager, are we?”
“Oh, fuck, it’s been four days – ”
“And I will make you wait even longer if you don’t behave yourself.”
“I’m sorry. I will. I’ll wait however long you see fit. I just miss you - ”
“Where are you?”
“I’m at June’s. On the bed. Sitting on top of the covers.”
“And what are you wearing?”
“Pajama bottoms, but I can take them off – ”
“You’ll do whatever I tell you to do. And nothing more. Is that understood?”
“Yes, Peter.”
“Lie back on the bed. Hold the phone in your right hand. And fondle yourself with the left. Over your pants. Long, slow strokes. Are you hard?”
“Yes, I’ve been hard all day.”
“Shut up. Put the phone on speakerphone, place it on the pillow, and then go to your toybox. Get out a vibrator, a cockring, the inflatable plug, and lube. A lot of lube. When you get back to the bed, say: I’m ready.”
“…I’m ready.”
“Put on the cockring. Then lube up the vibe, turn it on, and shove it inside yourself. As fast as you can without it hurting. I want it at full speed, Neal.”
“Yes, Peter. I – fuck – I’m ready. Oh, god…”
“Is it hitting your prostate?”
“Yes.”
“Do you think you can put the cockring on without coming?”
“I – I think so?”
“I think you can. Go ahead. Slide that ring over your pretty little dick, and then ease your balls into it – are they swollen yet?”
“So much, they’ve been swollen for day – ”
“Is it on?”
“Yes, Peter, please – ”
“With your left hand, grab the base of the vibrator. And fuck yourself with it. Make sure to hit your prostate every time. And twist it, Neal, I know how much you love getting that tight little hole of yours all loose and ready for me – and as soon as I get back, I’m going to fuck you, baby, I’m going to give you just what you need.”
“I’m ready, I’m so ready for you.”
“Tell me how you feel.”
“I feel – Jesus, Peter, I’m so fucking lonely - I missed you, I missed your cock, I missed your mouth – ”
“I think you just missed being able to orgasm.”
“Fuck. Yes, that, too. But I’ve been good. I’ve been so – unh – so good, haven’t left the apartment, haven’t touched my dick.”
“Did you watch the porn I gave you?”
“Yes.”
“What did you think?”
“I didn’t know you were filming when we – when we did that – ”
“Your hole was so loose after El and I fucked you. I didn’t think you’d be able to feel it, after I pulled out and she kept going – but did you see the look on your face?”
“Yes, it hurt.”
“You came again in five minutes. Did you enjoy watching it?”
“…yes, Peter.”
“Did it make your little dick hard?”
“Yes.”
“Say it.”
“It made my – my little dick hard.”
“How do you feel now?”
“My – my cock’s dripping. With precum. It’s all over my hand, and my stomach – I wish you were here to lick it off. The vibe’s fucking strong, I can – I can practically feel it in my teeth – ”
“You picked the big one, didn’t you? The loud one? I think I can hear it. Hear it every time you pull it out and fuck it back up inside you. And you’re going way too slowly. Speed the fuck up, Neal.”
“I – oh, oh, fuck. No, I can’t do this, I can’t.”
“I can still hear it. You’re going just the pace I want.”
“Ah –too – too much. It’s too much. Gotta – gotta - fuck!”
“What happened?”
“I – I lost my hold on it. And it slipped out. It – it slipped out and it felt so fucking good on my rim, buzzing while I tried to clench around it.”
“Fuck, baby. Pick it up and tease yourself like that some more.”
“Oh, god. Peter. I’m doing it. I’m doing it for you. Peter, I’m – Peter, I miss you, why aren’t you here?”
“Are you still jerking yourself off?”
“Of course I am, you didn’t tell me to stop, I’m not – not deaf.”
“Stop. Turn the vibe off and stop touching your dick. And lube up the other plug.”
“Okay. It’s – it’s really big.”
“I remember how big it is.”
“The vibe wasn’t nearly this big.”
“Shut up and push that giant plug into your greedy little hole. And don’t bite your lip – I want to hear every little gasp, every whimper – just like that. I bet your mouth’s open. Bet you bit your lip before I told you not to. Bet your pink lips are swollen and open, I’d fuck your mouth if I was there. Love it when you cry – did you get to your prostate again?”
“Unh – I – ah, fuck, I – ”
“I’ll take that as a yes. Keep going. You’ve got inches to go, still, don’t you? Oh, baby. Love those little noises. You’re so tight, it must be stretching you so good. Opening you up so fast. I know it hurts. I know it does. Keep going.”
“It’s – it’s in.”
“Good boy. Are you my good boy, Neal?”
“Yes.”
“Is your cock still hard?”
“Like a rock.”
“Play with your balls. Play with them until your dick’s jumping every time you touch it. I love it when it bounces around – we’ll try electricity, next month. I’ll make it dance. And you won’t be able to do a thing.”
“Okay, I will, I’ll do - ah - anything.”
“I know you will, sweetheart. Now play with your balls until you’re about to come. Until you would come, if you didn’t have that pesky little cock ring on. And tell me what you want me to do to you when I get home.”
“Let me – let me come. You will, I know you will – you – you love it when I – when I come for you. Been waiting for four days, I’m gonna – ah – I’m gonna come so much. And you’ll fuck me, I’ll be waiting for you, spread and wet and ready – I’ll have a toy buzzing in my ass, and you’ll pull it out, or – or maybe you won’t. No, you won’t, you’ll just shove in right next to it, and I’ll be screaming before you even start moving – ”
“Inflate the dildo.”
“Wh – what?”
“Grab the fucking blub, and squeeze it. It’s not that fucking hard. Grab it, and squeeze it. Twice.”
“FUCK!”
“Now fuck yourself with it.”
“Oh, it’s so big – it’s too big, it’s bigger than you, almost.”
“Squeeze it until you know it’s bigger than me. That should take – what, three or four more? Count them off.”
“Okay, Peter. One. T – oh, fuck. Do I – do I have to keep fucking myself with it – while it – while it gets bigger?”
“Good job asking for clarification, Neal. Yes, you do have to keep fucking yourself with it. I believe you’re ready for three.”
“Okay, I’m – I’m ready, I’m going to - ngh, fuck, three, three, Peter.”
“Good boy. At least once more.”
“F – f – ah! Ah – oh, no, oh, god, right – right there, I’m – please, I need – I need – I waited so long, I – ”
“Was that four?”
“Yes.”
“Good boy. I’m going to be there in – oh, about fifteen minutes. You grabbed the inflatable dildo that also vibrates, didn’t you?”
“…oh, Jesus. I can’t.”
“You can. Turn it on, put your hands behind your back, and wait for me. Say you’ll wait for me. I’ll wait for you to stop crying, I have all the time in the world, Neal. It just means you’ll have to wait a bit longer.”
“I’m – I’ll wait. I’ll wait for you. However long it takes.”
“Good boy.”
“Peter?”
“You sure answered the phone quickly. A little eager, are we?”
“Oh, fuck, it’s been four days – ”
“And I will make you wait even longer if you don’t behave yourself.”
“I’m sorry. I will. I’ll wait however long you see fit. I just miss you - ”
“Where are you?”
“I’m at June’s. On the bed. Sitting on top of the covers.”
“And what are you wearing?”
“Pajama bottoms, but I can take them off – ”
“You’ll do whatever I tell you to do. And nothing more. Is that understood?”
“Yes, Peter.”
“Lie back on the bed. Hold the phone in your right hand. And fondle yourself with the left. Over your pants. Long, slow strokes. Are you hard?”
“Yes, I’ve been hard all day.”
“Shut up. Put the phone on speakerphone, place it on the pillow, and then go to your toybox. Get out a vibrator, a cockring, the inflatable plug, and lube. A lot of lube. When you get back to the bed, say: I’m ready.”
“…I’m ready.”
“Put on the cockring. Then lube up the vibe, turn it on, and shove it inside yourself. As fast as you can without it hurting. I want it at full speed, Neal.”
“Yes, Peter. I – fuck – I’m ready. Oh, god…”
“Is it hitting your prostate?”
“Yes.”
“Do you think you can put the cockring on without coming?”
“I – I think so?”
“I think you can. Go ahead. Slide that ring over your pretty little dick, and then ease your balls into it – are they swollen yet?”
“So much, they’ve been swollen for day – ”
“Is it on?”
“Yes, Peter, please – ”
“With your left hand, grab the base of the vibrator. And fuck yourself with it. Make sure to hit your prostate every time. And twist it, Neal, I know how much you love getting that tight little hole of yours all loose and ready for me – and as soon as I get back, I’m going to fuck you, baby, I’m going to give you just what you need.”
“I’m ready, I’m so ready for you.”
“Tell me how you feel.”
“I feel – Jesus, Peter, I’m so fucking lonely - I missed you, I missed your cock, I missed your mouth – ”
“I think you just missed being able to orgasm.”
“Fuck. Yes, that, too. But I’ve been good. I’ve been so – unh – so good, haven’t left the apartment, haven’t touched my dick.”
“Did you watch the porn I gave you?”
“Yes.”
“What did you think?”
“I didn’t know you were filming when we – when we did that – ”
“Your hole was so loose after El and I fucked you. I didn’t think you’d be able to feel it, after I pulled out and she kept going – but did you see the look on your face?”
“Yes, it hurt.”
“You came again in five minutes. Did you enjoy watching it?”
“…yes, Peter.”
“Did it make your little dick hard?”
“Yes.”
“Say it.”
“It made my – my little dick hard.”
“How do you feel now?”
“My – my cock’s dripping. With precum. It’s all over my hand, and my stomach – I wish you were here to lick it off. The vibe’s fucking strong, I can – I can practically feel it in my teeth – ”
“You picked the big one, didn’t you? The loud one? I think I can hear it. Hear it every time you pull it out and fuck it back up inside you. And you’re going way too slowly. Speed the fuck up, Neal.”
“I – oh, oh, fuck. No, I can’t do this, I can’t.”
“I can still hear it. You’re going just the pace I want.”
“Ah –too – too much. It’s too much. Gotta – gotta - fuck!”
“What happened?”
“I – I lost my hold on it. And it slipped out. It – it slipped out and it felt so fucking good on my rim, buzzing while I tried to clench around it.”
“Fuck, baby. Pick it up and tease yourself like that some more.”
“Oh, god. Peter. I’m doing it. I’m doing it for you. Peter, I’m – Peter, I miss you, why aren’t you here?”
“Are you still jerking yourself off?”
“Of course I am, you didn’t tell me to stop, I’m not – not deaf.”
“Stop. Turn the vibe off and stop touching your dick. And lube up the other plug.”
“Okay. It’s – it’s really big.”
“I remember how big it is.”
“The vibe wasn’t nearly this big.”
“Shut up and push that giant plug into your greedy little hole. And don’t bite your lip – I want to hear every little gasp, every whimper – just like that. I bet your mouth’s open. Bet you bit your lip before I told you not to. Bet your pink lips are swollen and open, I’d fuck your mouth if I was there. Love it when you cry – did you get to your prostate again?”
“Unh – I – ah, fuck, I – ”
“I’ll take that as a yes. Keep going. You’ve got inches to go, still, don’t you? Oh, baby. Love those little noises. You’re so tight, it must be stretching you so good. Opening you up so fast. I know it hurts. I know it does. Keep going.”
“It’s – it’s in.”
“Good boy. Are you my good boy, Neal?”
“Yes.”
“Is your cock still hard?”
“Like a rock.”
“Play with your balls. Play with them until your dick’s jumping every time you touch it. I love it when it bounces around – we’ll try electricity, next month. I’ll make it dance. And you won’t be able to do a thing.”
“Okay, I will, I’ll do - ah - anything.”
“I know you will, sweetheart. Now play with your balls until you’re about to come. Until you would come, if you didn’t have that pesky little cock ring on. And tell me what you want me to do to you when I get home.”
“Let me – let me come. You will, I know you will – you – you love it when I – when I come for you. Been waiting for four days, I’m gonna – ah – I’m gonna come so much. And you’ll fuck me, I’ll be waiting for you, spread and wet and ready – I’ll have a toy buzzing in my ass, and you’ll pull it out, or – or maybe you won’t. No, you won’t, you’ll just shove in right next to it, and I’ll be screaming before you even start moving – ”
“Inflate the dildo.”
“Wh – what?”
“Grab the fucking blub, and squeeze it. It’s not that fucking hard. Grab it, and squeeze it. Twice.”
“FUCK!”
“Now fuck yourself with it.”
“Oh, it’s so big – it’s too big, it’s bigger than you, almost.”
“Squeeze it until you know it’s bigger than me. That should take – what, three or four more? Count them off.”
“Okay, Peter. One. T – oh, fuck. Do I – do I have to keep fucking myself with it – while it – while it gets bigger?”
“Good job asking for clarification, Neal. Yes, you do have to keep fucking yourself with it. I believe you’re ready for three.”
“Okay, I’m – I’m ready, I’m going to - ngh, fuck, three, three, Peter.”
“Good boy. At least once more.”
“F – f – ah! Ah – oh, no, oh, god, right – right there, I’m – please, I need – I need – I waited so long, I – ”
“Was that four?”
“Yes.”
“Good boy. I’m going to be there in – oh, about fifteen minutes. You grabbed the inflatable dildo that also vibrates, didn’t you?”
“…oh, Jesus. I can’t.”
“You can. Turn it on, put your hands behind your back, and wait for me. Say you’ll wait for me. I’ll wait for you to stop crying, I have all the time in the world, Neal. It just means you’ll have to wait a bit longer.”
“I’m – I’ll wait. I’ll wait for you. However long it takes.”
“Good boy.”
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“Yes.”
“Say it.”
“It made my – my little dick hard.”
*Ka-POW THUD!!!!!!!!!*
That's me EXPLODING before I BLACK OUT!!!!!!!
Get your ass back on the Internet. NOW.
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Thanks, bb! I think writing humiliation!kink has got me more intrigued by all the wonderful things that dirty-talk can do...
I AM BACK ON THE INTERNET NOW!
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"sloppy hole" (IDE...fuck!!!)
and
"...they can’t tell how easily I can take you apart."
Oh yes. Mmm!
So glad you're back!!!
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Umm... wow I have nothing coherent to say.... how did you make phonesex that is pure dialogue so freaking hot it was insane?!?!?!
AFJKLDAJFALSJKFLASDJFLAD O_O B! Geezus and you just typed this up 'real quick' !?
Neal is his good boy indeed!
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
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*ded*
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Thank you! :D
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Thanks, bb! I'm glad you liked it. :D
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I hope you have DIRTY DIRTY THOUGHTS whilst you're in the shower. Have fun at work! ;-)
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Thank you!!!!
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And I love how even though Peter talks dirty to Neal, there's still that caring shining through.
And sneaky Peter is sneaky, the way he's having Neal fuck himself and he's on the way over.
...was Peter in a taxi, or was he talking dirty while he was driving, because that makes me worried for all the other drivers on the road. :-D
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Thank you for the lovely review! I have clarified where Peter is in the revised version - for some reason, him driving around while Neal's on speakerphone, crying and begging, turns me on! So that's what's happening - even thought it is SO NOT RL SAFE.
Thank god for porn! :D
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Thanks, bb! I'm so glad you liked it! :D
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But this version is even better...and I am glad I have a private office. I need to get a couch, though.
I'd love to read what happens when Peter walks in the door.
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iPhones have made for some lovely, lovely AWKWARDNESS. I know I can't wait when I see my fave authors have posted new smut...
THANK YOU! :D
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Holy hell, you're lethal.
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I KILL WITH
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EXCELLENT!
Thank you for the lovely compliment/insult combo. Exactly what I was going for. :D
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Also: “I think you just missed being able to orgasm.” Best line ever. It made me laugh.
And...I know you're not a big fan of het, but I swear, the image of Peter and El with a strap-on doing double-penetration on Neal made me so hot.
I'm so greedy, and I know you're in MMOM, but if someday you get the chance to write that, I will officially love you for forever. <3 <3 As it is I'm already willing to have your children and offer up a kidney if you need one just so you can keep writing porn. :-D
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I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT! WHEE!!!
Now I'm all inspired to go work on it more! Thank you. :D
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good story!
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THANK YOU! :D
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I know what you mean! He suffers so prettily, and enjoys it so much... :D
Thank you so much!
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Subby!Neal is my fave... *happy sigh*
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Thank you so much!!! So glad you liked it. :D :D :D
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(belated reply to say:)
Thank you so much for the feedback, I'm so glad you liked the fic! :D
Re: (belated reply to say:)
Thank you-it's one of the ones I made myself and I'm particularly pleased with it:)
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“Put on the cockring. Then lube up the vibe, turn it on, and shove it up your greedy little hole. As fast as you can without hurting yourself. I want it on at full speed, Neal.”
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“Love how you sound when you get too turned on to talk. And your voice is filling my car – gets me hard, thinking that none of these people know what I’m doing to you, they can’t tell how easily I can take you apart. Now - do you think you can put the cockring on without coming?”
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Bossy Peter is the best!
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