ext_35043 ([identity profile] ursula4x.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hoosierbitch 2010-04-13 02:18 am (UTC)

This is the best yet.

I couldn't list the parts I liked best, but Moz was the rock of Neal's life and I loved that. I always wonder why Neal says Peter is the only one he trusts. What is it about Moz who appears faithful but not a yes man that makes Neal not trust him?

I love Neal freaking out about the prison comment. It was too facile for El to think that prison was just a step toward them. I am sure she had no idea and I would love for Peter to tell her. I think El can handle it.


Neal is growing in this story and becoming someone who is not a looking glass of himself.

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