I loved how the first part set up just how casual Neal is about sex for something and how he formed his general attitude, it adds real weight to the story.
You took my breath away with the description of Peter closing in on Neal.
And how after all that, Peter found a trigger anyway-!
Of everything I've seen you write though- Neal's anger was the most perfect. Love it! That was just amazingly well done, so well built- I have no words.
And Mozzie. At the end. He makes me want the next chapter so bad! I can vaguely see where it's going, but I know I won't love it to death until you put into words. <3!
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I loved how the first part set up just how casual Neal is about sex for something and how he formed his general attitude, it adds real weight to the story.
You took my breath away with the description of Peter closing in on Neal.
And how after all that, Peter found a trigger anyway-!
Of everything I've seen you write though- Neal's anger was the most perfect. Love it! That was just amazingly well done, so well built- I have no words.
And Mozzie. At the end. He makes me want the next chapter so bad! I can vaguely see where it's going, but I know I won't love it to death until you put into words. <3!