This is just epically beautiful. I love your MOZ!!! He's so great here, and I love it when you acknowledge what a BAMF he really is.

And then the conversation with El and Peter, and Neal not knowing if it's self-preservation or his own emotion, and then telling them while they're crying and Neal's not; and then how long it takes for Neal to really believe he's with them. Love, love, love.

I'm so glad you wrote another part to this, you wonderful writer, you :)