IF I COULD QUOTE THIS WHOLE THING I *WOULD*!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
You're amazing. You are amazing.
I will try, try, TRY to do My Favorite Parts, because you soooooooo deserve it after this!
"It had ended right after Merlin had tripped over Arthur’s sword and knocked them both over. Thankfully, neither of them fell on the blade – and by the time they’d gotten back up, the scorpion had somehow caught on fire."
LMAO!!! You did that perfectly! Go, Merlin!! :-D
And: "He knelt between Arthur’s legs to untie the laces of his boot, and Arthur palmed himself through his trousers. He was half-hard already."
I LOVE!!!! that Arthur is so tired and so easily aroused and too tired to fight it that he touches himself, even though he really shouldn't. UNNF!
And: “I wish you’d suck me,” Arthur whispered. And he hadn’t meant to say it out loud – hadn’t even meant to think it, those thoughts led to dangerous dreams – he was about to cover it up with a bad joke when Merlin said okay, and pushed Arthur’s hands aside.
Do you know??? Because I think you do. Goddamn...!!!
And: "Arthur lifted his hips so that Merlin could slide the fabric down his thighs, just far enough. Then he leaned forward and sucked the head of Arthur’s cock into his mouth."
*shiver*
And: "no one ever treated Arthur like that."
YesyesYES! THAT is why your stories are so sweltering! Because they're TRUE! Arthur DOES need someone competent and powerful to RELIEVE HIM OF DUTY! That kind of responsibility can be awful and it can be wonderful, amazing, perfect to just BOTTOM to someone! I love this.
And: "And, yes, rust was always a worry, but that was really no excuse for the vehemence with which Merlin was scrubbing at the metal."
You made me laugh and have a heart clench with this! ACK!
And: "Because tonight he felt the weight of his responsibility in every bruised limb, every strained muscle, every second he looked at Merlin’s lips and had to remind himself to look away."
Gorgeous! I want Merlin for Arthur SO MUCH.
And: and even though this wasn’t something they’d ever done before, it felt like they’d done it a hundred times. A thousand. Like they would do it for years to come.
“What are you doing?” he asked as Merlin’s long, clever fingers teased at his nipples before pulling his shirt over his head.
“Taking care of you,” Merlin replied.
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{B!!!!!!}}}}}}}}}}} Perfect.
And: “Have you ever been with another man before?” Merlin asked, and he stepped away and started walking backwards towards the bed. He was stripping as he went, and Arthur wanted to follow but he couldn’t look at the smooth expanse of Merlin’s torso and move at the same time, it just wasn’t going to happen. His nipples were pink. Small, tight nubs, and Arthur’s mouth watered with the urge to kiss them. “Arthur – answer the question.”
“No,” he said, flushing a little bit. “But I’m guessing you have?”
Merlin nodded. “Lots of times.”
I'm sorry, but that whole section was one big LUST ARROW!
And: “Did any of them ever lick your hole until you came?”
Arthur’s jaw literally dropped. “Are you insane? That’s filthy!”
Merlin licked his lips and Arthur couldn’t help but clench, imagining Merlin licking him down there..."
YOU
You're amazing. You are amazing.
I will try, try, TRY to do My Favorite Parts, because you soooooooo deserve it after this!
"It had ended right after Merlin had tripped over Arthur’s sword and knocked them both over. Thankfully, neither of them fell on the blade – and by the time they’d gotten back up, the scorpion had somehow caught on fire."
LMAO!!! You did that perfectly! Go, Merlin!! :-D
And: "He knelt between Arthur’s legs to untie the laces of his boot, and Arthur palmed himself through his trousers. He was half-hard already."
I LOVE!!!! that Arthur is so tired and so easily aroused and too tired to fight it that he touches himself, even though he really shouldn't. UNNF!
And: “I wish you’d suck me,” Arthur whispered. And he hadn’t meant to say it out loud – hadn’t even meant to think it, those thoughts led to dangerous dreams – he was about to cover it up with a bad joke when Merlin said okay, and pushed Arthur’s hands aside.
Do you know??? Because I think you do. Goddamn...!!!
And: "Arthur lifted his hips so that Merlin could slide the fabric down his thighs, just far enough. Then he leaned forward and sucked the head of Arthur’s cock into his mouth."
*shiver*
And: "no one ever treated Arthur like that."
YesyesYES! THAT is why your stories are so sweltering! Because they're TRUE! Arthur DOES need someone competent and powerful to RELIEVE HIM OF DUTY! That kind of responsibility can be awful and it can be wonderful, amazing, perfect to just BOTTOM to someone! I love this.
And: "And, yes, rust was always a worry, but that was really no excuse for the vehemence with which Merlin was scrubbing at the metal."
You made me laugh and have a heart clench with this! ACK!
And: "Because tonight he felt the weight of his responsibility in every bruised limb, every strained muscle, every second he looked at Merlin’s lips and had to remind himself to look away."
Gorgeous! I want Merlin for Arthur SO MUCH.
And: and even though this wasn’t something they’d ever done before, it felt like they’d done it a hundred times. A thousand. Like they would do it for years to come.
“What are you doing?” he asked as Merlin’s long, clever fingers teased at his nipples before pulling his shirt over his head.
“Taking care of you,” Merlin replied.
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{B!!!!!!}}}}}}}}}}} Perfect.
And: “Have you ever been with another man before?” Merlin asked, and he stepped away and started walking backwards towards the bed. He was stripping as he went, and Arthur wanted to follow but he couldn’t look at the smooth expanse of Merlin’s torso and move at the same time, it just wasn’t going to happen. His nipples were pink. Small, tight nubs, and Arthur’s mouth watered with the urge to kiss them. “Arthur – answer the question.”
“No,” he said, flushing a little bit. “But I’m guessing you have?”
Merlin nodded. “Lots of times.”
I'm sorry, but that whole section was one big LUST ARROW!
And: “Did any of them ever lick your hole until you came?”
Arthur’s jaw literally dropped. “Are you insane? That’s filthy!”
Merlin licked his lips and Arthur couldn’t help but clench, imagining Merlin licking him down there..."
OMG. OMGGGG!!!