Holy shit hon, this was amazing. Powerful - the depths of Jim's rage and helplessness fly off the screen to punch me in the gut. And the sensory imagery - spots of blood, burning pain, fractured ribs - this is alive in every way.
Wow.
The sex, as always, epically hot - but there's so much more here. The undercurrents of pain, frustration coupled with love and understanding - but not entirely selfless, Spock's getting something out of this too (and I would kill to have you explore that sometime).
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Holy shit hon, this was amazing. Powerful - the depths of Jim's rage and helplessness fly off the screen to punch me in the gut. And the sensory imagery - spots of blood, burning pain, fractured ribs - this is alive in every way.
Wow.
The sex, as always, epically hot - but there's so much more here. The undercurrents of pain, frustration coupled with love and understanding - but not entirely selfless, Spock's getting something out of this too (and I would kill to have you explore that sometime).
*is still reeling*
Guh. Just... GUH.