ext_25680 ([identity profile] photoash.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hoosierbitch 2010-07-14 02:55 am (UTC)

I concur with your assessment :)

I love Peter and Mozzie meeting for the good of Neal's mental health-- I loved Peter saying that Neal would be grinning saying "Peter trust me," even if he was having a nervous breakdown.

I liked the trembling hands a lot, very understated. The dark talk with Mozzie was good.

Where was Neal indeed O_o how did he get the clothes if he was just out of prison?? Oh well <3 that's what writing is for :D all the plot holes!

Now I wonder what Neal was getting up to in prison for 2 months! (And how exactly he ended up there - like did they cuff him on the runway and drag him away?? O_O) -- Those are things that I'd like to write about <3

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