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hoosierbitch ([personal profile] hoosierbitch) wrote2010-04-03 04:43 pm

Prompt me?

I am having trouble getting anything written. It is starting to worry me. Please help?

Prompt me with:
1. A timestamp - (2 years after Ice Ice Baby, 1 hour after Playing Pretend - pick any story and a length of time!)
2. A time when...
3. Any kink. (You can pick characters/situations, too, but at minimum: a kink!)

And I will do my best to write something for it!

Fandoms I'll write in: White Collar (duh), Sky High, Leverage, Friday Night Lights, Merlin, Community, Ancient Greek tragedies


Thanks in advance, lovely beautiful people!

[identity profile] hoosierbitch.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Neal looked about a breath away from crying the entire meal. Eyes tight, lips pressed together, pleading with Peter as much as he could without saying anything. He'd have to do this more often.

He used the vibrate function sparingly. Just when Neal was lifting his wine glass to his lips, or smiling at the waitress, or relaxing too much. By the time they finished their entrees, he was trembling. Peter ordered a slice of cheesecake and decided on the red.

"Pull the tablecloth over your lap," he said quietly after the waitress left. "Then keep your hands on the table. Sit back in your seat and spread your legs."

After Neal did as he asked Peter lifted his foot, rested it on the edge of Neal's seat, and pressed the sole of his shoe agaisnt Neal's cock. Neal hunched over the table and Peter pressed harder, increasing the pressure until Neal let out a small, helpless sound. Until he was sure it hurt as much as it gave pleasure.

It was late, and by then the surrounding tables were mostly empty. A small family and an old couple were the only ones who were close enough to see the way Neal started rubbing himself off against Peter's shoe. The sweat that dripped down his temple, the pain in his expression. "Tell me what it feels like," he said, honestly curious.

When Neal slowly lifted his head and looked at him, Peter's breath caught in his throat. He looked - he looked broken open, pressed to his limits and beyond, helpless to hide his feelings and hating it and desperate. He opened his mouth to answer and Peter turned up the vibrator as high as it would go.

Neal sobbed, loud enough that people turned to stare, and Peter came. He wasn't touching himself, hadn't meant to come, but Neal had sobbed and pressed his cock even harder against Peter's foot and hadn't for a second lost eye contact. He left the vibrator on as he rode the aftershocks, semen spreading in his boxers.

"We're leaving," he ordered when he caught his breath, pulling his wallet out and pulling out enough cash to leave a very sizable tip. He held his coat in front of his groin and pulled Neal up too quickly. He let out another groan, utterly failing to stifle it in Peter's shoulder. He had to practically carry him. Neal might have been able to support more of his own weight if Peter turned the vibrator off - but he was't feeling particularly generous. "Not been feeling well," Peter explained to the old couple who'd been staring at them. "I'm taking him home."

"Did you - did you come?" Neal gasped when they were both back in the car.

"Yes," Peter said. "And if you want to come at all tonight, you're going to have to do it before we get back to the apartment. Only one catch - " Neal growled at him. "You're not allowed to touch yourself."

*

(...I think this is actually the end. BWAHAHAHA!)

[livejournal.com profile] katikat - thank you SO MUCH for the prompt! *loves on you*

[identity profile] themkshrine.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
Just awesome!!!!! Peter came! On Neal's desperation! ewiwjtr vshfrgbh!!!

[identity profile] hoosierbitch.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! Thanks, yo! I'm so glad you liked it!!!! :D

[identity profile] asimaiyat.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 07:02 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure that level of hotness is legal in my state. >_>

The descriptions of Neal's facial expressions completely melted my brain, and possibly also my iPhone. Unf. I love how you can just drag it out, and it just keeps getting hotter and hotter.

[identity profile] hoosierbitch.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
EXCELLENT! Thank you so much! :D :D :D :D

I'm so glad I pleaded for prompts. I AM HAVING SO MUCH FUN. (I have reposted this fic, tho, because TYPOS ARE NOT SEXY.)

<3

(Anonymous) 2010-04-04 11:24 am (UTC)(link)
I'm the anon who posted this: http://community.livejournal.com/collarkink/1093.html?thread=927813#t927813 on the meme, and I just have to say, you hit the kink I was looking for with that so hard with such a short yet satisfying fic! I <3 the details about the design of the plug, the surprise!vibration function, and the descriptions of Neal standing up/sitting down. And how could I not love the fact that after all that, it's Peter who comes? And- squee!- I adore the fact that he just can't bring himself to care that that thing is still vibrating away inside Neal as they leave!

I guess what I mean is a I loved this fic in it's entirety. There wasn't a single part that didn't scream hot, hot, hot! at me. <3

[identity profile] hoosierbitch.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU ARE AN AWESOME ANON!

Thanks for giving me the shout-out on the meme! I'm so glad I could hit your kinks, even if I hadn't meant to!! (And also: that is a SEXY FRIGGIN' PROMPT. In the office? UNF UNF UNF.

...maybe I will write a sequel. Hmm....)

:D :D :D

Feel free to leave a prompt or two here if you want more! I'd be happy to provide. :D

(Anonymous) 2010-04-05 11:51 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks!

No prob on the shout out- you deserve all the exposure you get. Such a fantastic writer. *is a lurker fan who will have to comment more often* (For some reason I like them doing it in the office with people around and not knowing. I'm a little weird and specific like that.)

0_0 A sequel! That- can I prompt that? Please? That would be so awesome!

[identity profile] katikat.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 12:17 pm (UTC)(link)
That is so hot! *beams* Thank you :)

[identity profile] hoosierbitch.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
You are so very, very welcome! Thank you for helping me out! Have fun working on your BB fic - it's gonna be EPIC!

:D

[identity profile] smokexscribbles.livejournal.com 2010-04-29 06:12 am (UTC)(link)
i just read this and

thank you

thank you for existing