Oh wow. Thank you. That was delicious. The first paragraph- I have no words. It was just such a realistic way to feel, I felt like I was in Neal's head from the jump. And this was hot, especially with El all casual about making Neal walk into the kitchen and just- complete unfazed by the naked man being punished in her living room. <3
Re: Weights
Date: 2010-04-05 11:45 am (UTC)The first paragraph- I have no words. It was just such a realistic way to feel, I felt like I was in Neal's head from the jump.
And this was hot, especially with El all casual about making Neal walk into the kitchen and just- complete unfazed by the naked man being punished in her living room. <3