B, this is absolutely wonderful! It starts out SO. VERY. HOT.
“If you really want to wait until we’ve gone out a few times before I take you home and fuck you till you cry, then, sure; we can do that,” Peter replied, taking a sip of his iced tea.
AND
“I think you want to be hurt. I think you want someone to make you hurt. Distract you from all the thoughts flying around in your head. I don’t think you can follow rules without knowing that they’re going to be enforced – but I think you’re going to do whatever I tell you to do. Just because I told you to do it. Am I right?”
Are Dom!Peter pieces of BRILLIANCE.
But it's also realistic and sweet (and HOT AGAIN!) and even sad. This:
"...You’re not going to take him from me,” she said, and there was a ring on her finger and Neal’s hands were dirty with his own semen, he wasn’t going to argue with her."
made me so sad for Neal. And yet it worked and was still hot and real.
You continue to impress the shit out of me with how much you've learned about D/s and power play and with how unbearably hot you make it time and time again!
You fucking ROCK.
p.s. FIND. A WAY. TO WRITE. AND COMMENT. THIS WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!! Or I'll go into fucking withdrawal. :-I
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Date: 2010-05-06 10:39 pm (UTC)“If you really want to wait until we’ve gone out a few times before I take you home and fuck you till you cry, then, sure; we can do that,” Peter replied, taking a sip of his iced tea.
AND
“I think you want to be hurt. I think you want someone to make you hurt. Distract you from all the thoughts flying around in your head. I don’t think you can follow rules without knowing that they’re going to be enforced – but I think you’re going to do whatever I tell you to do. Just because I told you to do it. Am I right?”
Are Dom!Peter pieces of BRILLIANCE.
But it's also realistic and sweet (and HOT AGAIN!) and even sad. This:
"...You’re not going to take him from me,” she said, and there was a ring on her finger and Neal’s hands were dirty with his own semen, he wasn’t going to argue with her."
made me so sad for Neal. And yet it worked and was still hot and real.
You continue to impress the shit out of me with how much you've learned about D/s and power play and with how unbearably hot you make it time and time again!
You fucking ROCK.
p.s. FIND. A WAY. TO WRITE. AND COMMENT. THIS WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!! Or I'll go into fucking withdrawal. :-I