Lady - your writing gets better and better and better. I don't need to tell you how hot the sexy!bits are...but what really blows my mind is how well your gone into the psyche of these characters. I never feel like I'm reading something that could be about any two bodies coming together...this is clearly Peter Burke and Neal Caffrey - and Elizabeth Burke.
There is so much going on here - but what I really love is the aftercare - and when Peter realizes (obviously experienced Dom that he is) just how difficult this will be because he actually loves Neal - it's more than just fulfilling desire, its about the heart and the mind.
I also want to say that when I woke up at 2 am and compulsively opened my laptop and read this, I thought I was dreaming. I read it again at 3 am and again at 5:30. And once more at 8:30. It's still incredible
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Date: 2010-06-10 01:08 pm (UTC)There is so much going on here - but what I really love is the aftercare - and when Peter realizes (obviously experienced Dom that he is) just how difficult this will be because he actually loves Neal - it's more than just fulfilling desire, its about the heart and the mind.
I also want to say that when I woke up at 2 am and compulsively opened my laptop and read this, I thought I was dreaming. I read it again at 3 am and again at 5:30. And once more at 8:30. It's still incredible