This was so well-written, hon. I'm a sucker for angsty, dirty, nasty sex with a heaping helping of emotional undercurrent - I just read your Kirk/McCoy kink bingo D/s fic you posted the other day, and it had so many of the same strong undercurrents that are just so good.
I like the metaphor of Jim's rooms vs. Spock's rooms, and the context about what they do in each of their respective rooms; the very last line ( There’s nothing to break in Jim’s rooms except for Jim. And everything in Spock’s rooms is precious. ) is perfect. Your attention to detail and sensory input is fantastic, and there were several turns of phrase that had me whimpering and admiring them by turns ( And when Jim’s got more violence than humanity in his body... BAWWW). Anyway! I reeeaaaaally enjoyed this. ♥
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Date: 2010-06-07 01:16 am (UTC)This was so well-written, hon. I'm a sucker for angsty, dirty, nasty sex with a heaping helping of emotional undercurrent - I just read your Kirk/McCoy kink bingo D/s fic you posted the other day, and it had so many of the same strong undercurrents that are just so good.
I like the metaphor of Jim's rooms vs. Spock's rooms, and the context about what they do in each of their respective rooms; the very last line ( There’s nothing to break in Jim’s rooms except for Jim. And everything in Spock’s rooms is precious. ) is perfect. Your attention to detail and sensory input is fantastic, and there were several turns of phrase that had me whimpering and admiring them by turns ( And when Jim’s got more violence than humanity in his body... BAWWW). Anyway! I reeeaaaaally enjoyed this. ♥