This was really hot. But what really got to me was the end. How Peter and El acknowledge that Neal might not always be comfortable with Peter and they're okay with that, those last four sentences, but mostly this line "this was real, it was happening, he got to have this" really got to me.
And goodness, the way you did the whole thing, I really felt there, in the room, in Neal's head. And it was a delightfully emotional place to be. :)
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Date: 2010-05-07 12:55 pm (UTC)This was really hot. But what really got to me was the end. How Peter and El acknowledge that Neal might not always be comfortable with Peter and they're okay with that, those last four sentences, but mostly this line "this was real, it was happening, he got to have this" really got to me.
And goodness, the way you did the whole thing, I really felt there, in the room, in Neal's head. And it was a delightfully emotional place to be. :)