I don't have a lot of time to read, but WC is my new addiction and I've been wanting some decent Peter/Neal fic - I certainly wasn't disappointed when I read this one! Excellent job, weaving the past memories with the present situation. I love the way you can imply so much when Neal is returned to the room - worse than if it was explained in detail because it leaves the reader to imagine all sorts of things.
And the last line is such a perfect way to close it all out - you brought tears to my eyes and that's not always easy to do.
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Date: 2010-02-24 02:29 pm (UTC)And the last line is such a perfect way to close it all out - you brought tears to my eyes and that's not always easy to do.